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Title: "A Taste Of Things To Come" 1/1
Author: Brenda ([livejournal.com profile] azewewish)
Pairing: Jared Padalecki/Jeffrey Dean Morgan/Jensen Ackles
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Never happened.
Summary: Jeff and Jensen torture Jared. In a very good way, of course.
Notes: Very belated birthday fic for my girl [livejournal.com profile] without_me. Sorry I couldn't fit the 69 in there, but I totally owe you. *MWAH*



Jeff slides bruised lips off of Jared's cock, gliding up slow and smooth, tongue leaving a wet trail along the head. He sits up on his haunches, long fingers wrapping immediately around the spit-shiny length. When Jared can focus around the need pulsing through his entire body, he can see the hairs on Jeff's chest are matted with sweat. A small whimper, embarrassing, but he doesn't care, escapes his lips as Jeff starts to fist his cock, lazy and slow. Too slow.

Jared makes a move to sit up, to grab Jeff's hand, help him along, something, please, God, anything, but Jensen is immediately there to hold his wrists down. Jared had almost forgotten he was at the head of the bed, watching and waiting.

"Not yet," Jensen says, making a small tsking sound in the back of his throat. "No moving, remember?" He presses the heels of his palms down to prove his point. Jared knows he'll have bruises later as a reminder.

The sheets on the bed have long since been pushed or kicked off. The lights are on, but dimmed – bright enough so Jared can see the glint of grey in Jeff's beard, but not too bright to blind him. The entire room smells of sex and sweat. Jared takes a deep breath, inhales the faint scent of aftershave and lube mingling together. His hips lift in supplication, even though he knows it's pointless to beg. Jeff and Jensen have spent the entire night torturing the living fuck out of him.

He wouldn't want them any other way.

Jeff places a warning hand on Jared's hip, stilling the movement. He removes his other hand from Jared's cock in punishment. "None of that."

"Please..." Jared's voice is hoarse, raw. He barely recognizes it.

"Now you know begging ain't gonna do you a bit of good," Jensen says and drags his hands along Jared's arms, marking sinew, muscle and skin with ragged nails. Jared bites his lower lip to keep from begging again.

"So..." Jeff pushes Jared's thighs even farther apart, scoots in close. Close, but not nearly close enough. Jared can feel the head of Jeff's cock along the cleft of his ass, and fights the urge to push down. "What to do to you next...?"

Jared doesn't bother to try to offer any ideas. Neither Jeff nor Jensen would listen to him anyway.

"You look really fucking hot with your cock buried in his ass," Jensen suggests. Jared doesn't need to look up to know that Jensen is grinning that self-satisfied grin of his.

"Reading my mind again."

"Well, it is pretty one-track."

"I'm a man of simple tastes," Jeff replies, and Jared wants to kiss Jensen for the suggestion, but Jeff beats him to it, grabbing the back of Jensen's head to pull him close. The kiss is messy, hard, with clanging teeth and sliding tongues. Jared watches with bated breath, envious and needy.

When they part, Jeff's eyes seem black, filled with every dark fantasy Jared's ever had. He wraps his hand around Jared's cock again, slowly fisting the length. His next words are uttered in a voice that's part growl, part whisper. "After I make you come, just like this, I'm gonna fuck you 'til you can't walk, gonna fill your tight hole with my cock and ram so far inside you that you'll feel it in your throat."

Please, God, yes...

"Just think..." Jensen joins Jeff, wrapping his fingers snug around the base of Jared's cock as he looks down, meets Jared's gaze. And simply smiles when Jared bucks up into their fists. "Jeff and I are gonna take turns pounding into you until you're all good and stretched, and then..." He bends enough to murmur the next words against Jared's ear, fingers a slick blur as he and Jeff speed up, "...then we're both gonna fuck you, both our cocks inside you at the same time, making you ours, until you pass out."

Jared doesn't even make a noise when he comes, inarticulate and raw, over Jensen and Jeff's hands. Words aren't what they want from him anyway.

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Date: 2008-01-12 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] way2busymom.livejournal.com
Jesus fuck....Dead from the hot over here.

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Date: 2008-01-19 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
\o/ My work here is done, then.

Glad you liked it!!!

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Date: 2008-01-12 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auryn-wren.livejournal.com
Oh My God! That was scorching hot! I love it when Jeff is being dominant, and the same of Jensen, and them doing it together?

Please please tell me there's more of this? I want to see those threats (promises?) being carried out!

Lovely, very lovely. More please ^_^

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Date: 2008-01-19 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
I do have a ridiculous soft spot for Jensen & Jeff tag-teaming other men. *g*

Glad you liked it!!! (And I might write more in the future...)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com
Ditto ! That was an awsome story.

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Date: 2008-01-19 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sammynce.livejournal.com
Fuck this is so fucking hot and good and just love this threesome and doublepenetrated!Jared!! GUh that's so fucking hot!!!!
It will be really awesome if you want to post it at [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
It would be really awesome! LOVE IT TOTALLY
Thank you for this really great fic

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!! I'm so glad you liked it!!!

There really should be more DP in fics. *g* We should start a trend or sign a petition or something.

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Date: 2008-01-12 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iwwfw.livejournal.com
I love porny fic that starts the reader in the midst of the action to a ridiculous degree. I think I held my breath once I realized what I was diving in to and didn't release it until the end. What I love about this is the tiny, almost inconsequential details that really bring this scene to life -- make it so real. Jeff's chest hairs matted with sweat? I felt sparks shoot up my spine with that small inclusion. Jensen's ragged nails (I can totally see him as a stress biter), I got goosebumps. This was just a delicious overload of sensation.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!!! I had a LOT of fun writing this. And, man, Jared is one lucky dude. *g*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 10:30 pm (UTC)
titti: (Default)
From: [personal profile] titti
You've killed me, woman. OMG, this is so hot.

Have I mentioned how much I love your writing lately? Because I really do.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, baby!!!! *beams*

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Date: 2008-01-12 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] without-me.livejournal.com
Hahahaha, nowhere near as late as yours is. *titmash* Thank you, baby!!! Mmmmmmm, nothing like some good J3 smut, is there?

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
*HUGS* I'm thrilled you liked it, baby. Jcubed porn is always a good thing. ;)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thevulgarvirgin.livejournal.com
fan-FUCKING-tastic

*bows down to you* utterly delicious and perfect!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Yaye!!! Thank you so much!!!! :)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonmelody.livejournal.com
DAMN. That was all kinds of HOT.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
I have SUCH a kink for bottom!Jared. *g*

Glad you liked it, baby!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
OMG I NEED ICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Woohoo!!!!! :)

Glad you liked!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-12 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
OMG! I died and went to J3 Heaven...or Hell...whatever, same thing LOL...I thank you for this....

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading!!!! They are SO ridiculously hot together. *g*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alchemie.livejournal.com
Sweet Jesus this is hot. You write dirty like no one else. I thank you for it.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
*beams* N'awww, baby, thank you!!!!!!! It's easy when you have men that are this hot. ;)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 12:56 am (UTC)
lj_stowaway: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lj_stowaway
OMFG hot like burning. *goes to happy place*

I like it better this way, but you knew I'd say that. *g* Such gorgeous porn you write. Thanks!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
They are SO stupidly hot together. *nods*

Glad you liked, baby!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarahk-63.livejournal.com

sizzling hawt j3

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!! :)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com
Oh dear GOD. I. They. *whimper*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
*beams* They really are a whole lotta hot.

Glad you liked!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] runedgirl.livejournal.com
Oh, hot hot hot hot! Jensen can talk dirty with the best of 'em here, and man, was this ever *intense*. Thanks so much for sharing :)
Lynsey

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!! I do love me some dirty!talking!Jensen. Mmmm....

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com
No, seriously...I'm supposed to make a response to that?? Between the dirty talk and the teasing, I think melted brain is running out my ears...nnngghhh.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
They really are STUPIDLY hot together. *guh*

Glad you liked, hon!!! *mwah*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoozing-kitten.livejournal.com
Oh that was delicious. Completely and totally- just wow. Thanks for sharing.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 08:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badfalcon.livejournal.com
I... oh fuck that was hot ♥ so vivid and tangible and deliciously dirty *squirms in her seat*

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
*grins* Yaye!!!!

Thank you so much!!!! :)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tittakv.livejournal.com
I can't help thinking that it should take a longer fic than this to make me this hot and bothered. I need a bucker of ice!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you so much, baby!!!!! Sometimes you just want a quickie, y'know? ;)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com
oh, happy birthday to all of us! Deliciously hot and nasty and squirmy and yes. Yesyesyes. (Also, so glad I'm not the only one late w/her present. *g*)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
(*laughs* No, you're SO not alone.)

Glad you liked it, baby!!! It wasn't quite as porny as what I wanted, but Jared was pretty incoherent, so I did what I could. ;)

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greeniezona.livejournal.com
I don't think I can concentrate on reading anything else on my friends page today. Actually, I think I'm partially blind from the dirty.

Holy Christing fuck, woman.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Blind is good. Only, y'know, not, because there's SO much more hot porn out there to read! *g*

Glad you liked, baby!! (And, oh, my, your icon. Hi tied-up!Marton!!!)

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Date: 2008-01-13 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antheia.livejournal.com
Goddamn, woman. That was stupendously hot.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
They really do lend themselves SO well to the truly nasty, hot porn. *g*

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Date: 2008-01-13 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] softbluebuddy.livejournal.com
This is the first Supernatural fic I have ever read.

It won't be the last. Holy crap. I loved it almost as much as Jared did, if that is even remotely possible.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Oh, wow, really???

Hey, if you need recs, let me know. :)

And thanks for reading!!!!

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-13 07:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] arabella-hope.livejournal.com
Hooooot. I love the tension, Jared's want but...that he knows them so well, knows exactly how to respond, how it will play out. And the dirty talk! djhfkhjcsx damn.

(no subject)

Date: 2008-01-19 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com
Jared is one lucky dude. *nods*

Thanks for reading, baby!!!!
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