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Aw. And for Pity's Sake! Put that clever little brain of yours to reviewing what you just thought.

Orlando's a smart cookie, but a little slow on the uptake at times. *g*

*flash-back* Humphrey Bogart and the hat. That analogy obviously works for me. *g*

I was thinking more the car scene in Double Indemnity, but Bogart totally works.

*lol* Clever boy. Love the talking bits. Really, the dialog throughout has been grand.

Snarky, witty Orlando is my favorite.

Careful there, Karl. Try subtle, you've a promise to keep.

Karl, I think, has been pretty subtle when he's needed to be. Sometimes, I think, his exuberance gets the best of him.

His delivery and the idea, spot on.

Thanks, hon! I have to imagine that it would be something he'd want to discuss, y'know?

Love the banter most, but what goes into the pot is strangely fascinating. You have a unique sense of humor.

And, the scary part is, every single thing that gets put in the pot is completely real. I even own a few of the items from Part 10's poker game. *g*


So, he's finally stopped obsessing over his love-life and started obsessing over his love. Wonder when he'll realize it.

Yes, exactly!!!!