No, but seriously now? I LOVE how this chapter turned out. I mean you know I adore Karl, right? But it fills me with so.much.joy that his brilliant scheming / playing Cupid didn't pan out exactly the way he planned it. For one, because I think flustered and slightly frustrated Karl is about the sweetest thing ever and then because well, you never should be too sure of yourself and your plans, even if you're Karl. I totally adore this twist. I also adore how the first bit of this feels slightly uncomfortable even, told from Sean's pov - it's not a big thing, nothing to make anyone really twitchy but I like how you weaved in that slight bit of unexplained unease or something on Sean's part, niiiice bit of writing.
Viggo had me crying tears of laughter again - if Orli isn't careful, Vig is probably gonna hook up with his dog loving uncle sooner or later :). (I also lovelove that again it shines through that Karl and Harry still talk about everything (these snogs included) and that again I felt a tiny bit of an arched eyebrow on Harry's part there regarding Karl's going about this thing... love that).
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Date: 2009-02-01 06:00 pm (UTC)No, but seriously now? I LOVE how this chapter turned out. I mean you know I adore Karl, right? But it fills me with so.much.joy that his brilliant scheming / playing Cupid didn't pan out exactly the way he planned it. For one, because I think flustered and slightly frustrated Karl is about the sweetest thing ever and then because well, you never should be too sure of yourself and your plans, even if you're Karl. I totally adore this twist. I also adore how the first bit of this feels slightly uncomfortable even, told from Sean's pov - it's not a big thing, nothing to make anyone really twitchy but I like how you weaved in that slight bit of unexplained unease or something on Sean's part, niiiice bit of writing.
Viggo had me crying tears of laughter again - if Orli isn't careful, Vig is probably gonna hook up with his dog loving uncle sooner or later :). (I also lovelove that again it shines through that Karl and Harry still talk about everything (these snogs included) and that again I felt a tiny bit of an arched eyebrow on Harry's part there regarding Karl's going about this thing... love that).