I have no idea how I missed the first two, but just read all three and holy hell, is that a nice little jolt of delicious :-)
I love how comfortable Sean and Orlando are in the second piece, how you describe the dance and the way they kiss. I also love the mood of the first few lines of the first chapter. And I love where you choose to come into this scene, how you show Karl and Orlando through Sean's eyes.
Yum. Karl/Orli/Harry may still be my favourite, but a little switcharoo every now and again with Sean is *certainly* welcome.
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Date: 2008-06-07 01:54 am (UTC)I love how comfortable Sean and Orlando are in the second piece, how you describe the dance and the way they kiss. I also love the mood of the first few lines of the first chapter. And I love where you choose to come into this scene, how you show Karl and Orlando through Sean's eyes.
Yum. Karl/Orli/Harry may still be my favourite, but a little switcharoo every now and again with Sean is *certainly* welcome.