ext_3501 ([identity profile] azewewish.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] broadwriting 2009-05-18 04:24 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much!!!

I love how Orlando compares everyone to members of his family, and that they really are his family.

Which was exactly what I wanted - that feeling that Orlando had found a family while he was filming. :)

You made me see that so vividly through their eyes as well, I felt all glowy as if I had just discovered such a thing.

Oh, excellent!!! I was worried that people would get bored with the slow build-up, so I'm glad to hear that it worked & that the payoff was realistic.

Thanks again for reading!!!!! :)

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