ext_39807 ([identity profile] rifleman-s.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] broadwriting 2008-08-14 11:48 am (UTC)

"No amount of mental coaching had been enough to prepare him for his first real sight of Karl in over six months."

I'm glad you decided to dust this off and post!

Particularly liked the way the "him" is left to our imaginations . . .

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