ext_1622 ([identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] broadwriting 2008-08-13 06:17 pm (UTC)

I especially like how you've suggested, rather than outright spelled out, the details of what happened between them. This was a really nice read, with just the right level of regret and sadness and ambiguity about how it'll all turn out.

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