ext_3581 ([identity profile] moosesal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] broadwriting 2007-11-07 07:04 pm (UTC)

Oh. My. God. First, this just has so many of my kinks in it. There's fingering in the bathroom. There's felching. There's DOUBLE PENETRATION!!!! There's a degree of indirect humiliation that just ... rowr, get's my engine purring. Oh babe. I don't know where to start. Some favorite bits:

Jensen had come all over Jared's face and chin, thick strands rolling down Jared's cheeks, mouth, and throat.

and

...You wanna fuck her pussy, feel my cock alongside yours?"
Jensen waited a beat for a protest that never came, then flipped the lock on the door.


and the whole Sandy part *thud* and

"What's mine is yours." He winked at Jensen like it was a joke.
They both knew it wasn't.


and

pounding into him while – Michael, Mickey, whatever his name was – was in the kitchen fixing himself a snack.

A snack. That's just so perfect.

Oh but the ending. With Chad. All through this I was sort of loving how Jensen was talking to Chad about it and waiting to see where that led. To have Jensen giving details? Wow. Hot and fucked up. But then that Chad came to take care of him? You broke me. And I loved every second of it.

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