I like this. :) I like not only that the Marines were interested in Dean, but that Dean seemed interested in them, even if only briefly.

Favorite lines:

a terse note in tightly coiled handwriting

I love that little detail about what his handwriting looks like.

"Mind waking your brother up?"

"Uh, no. No sir," Dean replied, and stumbled back down the hallway to throw a pillow at his brother's head.

LOL at how Dean wakes Sam up.

"I take it you're Dean, then."

"Yes sir." He straightened before he was even aware of having done so.

I love Dean’s automatic response here.

"Mr. Winchester, your son broke the state record in the Junior Air Rifle State Championship meet last week."

Of course he did. *pets Dean*