ext_2168 (
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2006-02-20 04:56 pm (UTC)
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It's hard to pull off the 2nd person POV, but this really worked. Especially love the ending. Very sweet, but completely believable.
(and the sight of that grin is like a fast punch to the solar plexus)
So true. ;-)
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(and the sight of that grin is like a fast punch to the solar plexus)
So true. ;-)