ext_1267 ([identity profile] prairiedaun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] broadwriting 2005-12-31 07:35 pm (UTC)

*flails* Brenda!

liable to drown in his own guilt and sense of responsibility Spot on. He's just so damn earnest, and feels responsible for everyone and everything. And I love Sanderson's response to that.

I love this description, Eversmann uncrumpled his boonie and placed it on his head, taking care to smooth out the brim. His rank insignia glowed dully in the brilliant sun. It just reflects the guilt and uncertainty that Eversmann is feeling so well. Love it.

Thank you so very much for this. It's wonderful (and a good sort-of prequel for Aftermath).

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