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2004-07-15 09:46 am (UTC)
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These are absolutely brilliant!!!! Of course MINE is the best! That is so much better than what I wrote, I love it!
Poet, the part about the snowflakes! OMG, beautiful!
Copper, the last line... draws you back into the drabble to reread and be reminded yourself.
The last line of ashes, "Wonders if they taste like ashes carried away by a strong east wind." What an image!
I want to find more writing like this!
But first, have to see Arthur again!
Thank you Thank you for this!
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Poet, the part about the snowflakes! OMG, beautiful!
Copper, the last line... draws you back into the drabble to reread and be reminded yourself.
The last line of ashes, "Wonders if they taste like ashes carried away by a strong east wind." What an image!
I want to find more writing like this!
But first, have to see Arthur again!
Thank you Thank you for this!